teminikan, 25.09
1 min readOct 3, 2021

[T]his poet starts with ellipsis

of smothered frisson

of emotions, blurred in the

monochromatic lines of

lingering memories.

A score and five, you remain

delicately embalmed in

commas, colons, and etc.

for you are a body of ethereal

writing, yet unfinished.

The poem ends with an ellipsis

of annihilated expression,

dotted in dull hue; grey

black and white…

Ellipsis.

Author’s Note

The poetic persona suffers from dementia. An old man who is in love with his old lover, for years back. He notes that many words have been omitted because they lack expression, and he’s forgotten a lot.

He explains that though the memories of the good, giddy times and romance slowly fade, there are still few special moments he holds on to. And while pages may attempt to fill in what she is, and what he feels for her, she remains a continuous piece of eternal writing, the same with his love for her.

The poetic persona concludes that there are so many things he’d love to remember and write, which can only happen when he recalls, hence the ellipsis.

Temininkansoso. 🖊

teminikan, 25.09
teminikan, 25.09

Written by teminikan, 25.09

existential danfo, 25.09. Every story is a journey to retrieve my mojo.

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